I definitely think it is an improvement over the older version. I’m reserving some judgment till after I see it printed.
What I’m worried about is the yellow email address. yellow on white is bad but i’d like to give it a chance and see if its legible. I’m also interested to see how the spacing turns out. Up until now there has always been a line of text above scamp(he has a name now). It wasn’t working out so i took it out but that left me with way to much space so I moved him up quite a bit to try to even it out. I also added in the “robot modes” part above the line hoping that would cut into the empty space a bit.
I also wonder if the line between the 28 and 29 is to heavy by a point or two.